Also, the block of red on the side is kind of bulky and too eye-catching. I also used a grid on this one but , so far, I don't think it has been nearly as successful.
Thursday, September 24, 2009
Health Article
So I figured I would try and make this image a bit bigger than the last, although I know this layout has some serious issues. For one, I need to work more color in somehow. This is frustrating because I really don't want to color my illustration (it's of a girl with a stomach ache) but I'm not sure what else to do.
Also, the block of red on the side is kind of bulky and too eye-catching. I also used a grid on this one but , so far, I don't think it has been nearly as successful.
Also, the block of red on the side is kind of bulky and too eye-catching. I also used a grid on this one but , so far, I don't think it has been nearly as successful.
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This one needs a lot of work. Just a whole lot of bland. What are you going to do? Will that be an illustration or photo at the top. At the moment it isn't doing what needs to be done. The salmon colored side bar isn't convincing yet. and don't use that color as a stroke or drop shadow in the headline. Figure something else out.
ReplyDeleteOkie, got it. The image in the upper-left corner is going to be an illustration, I just need to make it thicker, but I might scrap the idea altogther and just take a picture of someone's mouth from a side-view and make it look like they're eating the headline. If not too many people do that idea too that is.
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